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Positive feedback.

Today we turned in our memoirs and we as a class did some peer editing. 4 o my fellow classmates read my memoir before it was turned into the professor. I received the most amazing feedback ever! Most saying that they almost cried, very good vocabulary, followed all the guidelines.. And many more. At the end, there was a question that had to be answered: what advice would you give to the author? One girl wrote: for the author to write a book!! She has it in her to do it. She can take people anywhere she wants with the way she writes so descriptively.
I thought if Cindy right away because she told me the same thing when I first joined here.
Being on this site has helped me out a lot!
I love my writing family!


Daniela Bustamante

14th March 2013


Good for you Daniela! So when does your book come out? :)


Cindy Beitinger

14th March 2013


That a tough one. I really have to think about it. It's THAT hard for me to just write on and on. I'll plan it out and then give you an estimate time.

Gosh so many typos in my post! This iPhone kills me!


Daniela Bustamante

14th March 2013


What is your book called? Is it published? Sorry don't know haven't read other discussions for a few days!! Congrats on all of the feedback!!! You are a really smart cookie :)


Analise Arto

16th March 2013


By writing family if that includes me as well, then allow me to return the compliment that I love reading you. Now buy a laptop so you can answer discussions as I know you cant access the discussion panel on ipad or phone.


Asma Ahsan

24th March 2013


Don't have a book yet Analise... But soon!

Asma, of course it includes you! I'm getting a laptop soon! I have to for school.


Daniela Bustamante

2nd April 2013


I can't for the life of me adapt to a laptop. I write on a big normal size wireless computer with a large screen. It has it's drawbacks, because I am usually stuck in one room.

Daniela, I hope I am included too.


Davide Castel

6th April 2013


Of course Lucy! Everyone is!


Daniela Bustamante

5th April 2013


Lucy - stay GLUED to us. PLEASE!

Daniela - thanks. Buy the laptop soon. if you read me on phone, just tap on any line in text and add comment which you can via phone. Then you dont need to wait for laptop.


Asma Ahsan

8th April 2013


I'll make sure to do that. There's a laptop where I live, it just that it's veryyyyyyy slow and it frustrates me.


Daniela Bustamante

7th April 2013


Hmmm - use phone cleverly. do as i do now - where you cant open discussion, just add comment in text anywhere. We get notified. Dont worry.


Asma Ahsan

8th April 2013


I will :)


Daniela Bustamante

8th April 2013


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