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The Funny Thing about Avery King

Hey guys! I just wanted everyone to know that I'm starting on a new novel titled The Funny Thing about Avery King. I have added the first two chapters here on scribeslice, and would love some feedback, and any suggestions of any kind! Thanks :)


Amanda Krumme

4th June 2013


Excellent idea to discuss it here Amanda. All the best. :)


Asma Ahsan

4th June 2013


I have read it. It starts well. Will you be adding the entire book here or getting it published? Whatever it is, do keep us posted. It seems like a good one.


Asma Ahsan

4th June 2013


Just wanted to say that chapters 3-6 are now on scribeslice. I will be adding the entire thing on here as I write it. That being said, things may go through some major editing. I'll let you know when previous chapters have been changed significantly, as well.


Amanda Krumme

4th June 2013


Good to hear.


Asma Ahsan

5th June 2013


Chapters 7 and 8 are up :)


Amanda Krumme

5th June 2013


Excellent. Reading the lot now. Get back to you soon on it.


Asma Ahsan

6th June 2013


Asma, you seem to be the only one reading right now, but I thought I'd say it here just incase anyone else got on board. I didn't like my chapters being so short, and so I have combined the original 8 chapters that were up, into just one chapter. Still the exact same thing- just not as broken up.


Amanda Krumme

6th June 2013


Good to know. I read a lot actually, I try to read all the new writings in here when ever I get time. :)


Asma Ahsan

7th June 2013


So this discussion is super old, and I don't know if anyone will ever look at it, but while I was gone I completely restarted this book. I will be deleting the Avery King that I posted before.


Amanda Krumme

21st August 2014


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