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A sea of darkness


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Its as if day is always night
I never see white clouds.


I'm drowning in a sea of sadness,
deeper and deeper every minute.
every other time I surface, someone throws a life saver.
but they miss and I go down again.


I want to swim, but my hands and feet are tied.
I want to swim, but i sink again,
and again.


All i want to do is be on the shore, with everyone, and not drown.
But I've realized its too late.
That im too deep...


Sooner or later i wont come back up.
SOMEONE HELP!


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