Davide Castel Davide Castel
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maybe another full-stop at the end?

Don Yarber Don Yarber
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I don't understand the question, Lucy.

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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I wanted this ? to be on the italic heading above this para. but it put it here. I tried 3 times. The same thing happened.

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Unless it should be continuous as in the 1st sentence.

Don Yarber Don Yarber
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Oh. I see now what you are saying. That sentence beginning with Am I dreaming is continued in the next line...or can I taste your lips of wine..softly brushing over mine ???? That is where the question mark should go.

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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maybe another full-stop at the end?

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Am I Dreaming?


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Lyrics to a song I wrote once many moons ago.


Am I dreaming, or can I smell your perfume?
Are you somewhere in my room, or am I dreaming?
Am I sleeping, or is that your voice I hear
Whispering softly in my ear, or am I dreaming?


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Cause if I’m dreaming then I want to sleep forever. 1 comment


Am I dreaming
or can I taste your lips of wine
Softly brushing over mine? Or am I dreaming?
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and your hair against my face? Or am I dreaming? 6 comments


If it’s a dream, please don’t wake me, please don’t ever,
Cause if I’m dreaming then I want to sleep forever.
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