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you give a (should be an) innocent bow

Elizabeth Tan Elizabeth Tan
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wow never noticed that. thank you :)

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Elizabeth Tan Elizabeth Tan
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I think I'm in Love


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You’re just another guy I see every day.
I see you walk by me all the time.
But now...every time I see you
I know I've completely fallen for you.


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