Zion Der hai Zion Der hai
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It is not that I have written this with any pre-thought theme, only a spur of the moment whisper in my heart. *should it be- "it's only a spur of the moment whisper in my heart"

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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thank you for correction. was not sure i had phrased it properly.

Karen Gomez Karen Gomez
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I totally love this!!:D

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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Thank you, Karen, for the sentiment I only write the words as they come to me. None of my writing is planned.

Daniel Bird Daniel Bird
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This is perfection if I ever read any such thing in a poem. Just magical!

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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"Two sides of one mirror;" beautiful line Leonard and a great analogy.

Zion Der hai Zion Der hai
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you can REMOVE the comma after "i love you"

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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again, a clerical, grammarical error on my part. thank you for clarification.

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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"My heart tells my soul...." What a beautiful idea of your heart and soul communicating with one another about the love you have for your girlfriend.

Tina Bart Tina Bart
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This is great darlin...very nice and I like it "Just Because" :)

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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Thank you, Tina. This is actually a piece I wrote for my girlfriend to tell her what she means to me.

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