Don Yarber Don Yarber
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I think "I am JUST gullible enough to brush aside what I saw" would be easier understood.

Larry Nabiong Larry Nabiong
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alright, Don..done. thanks

Don Yarber Don Yarber
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Did you mean "I am not blind" ?

Larry Nabiong Larry Nabiong
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same here...thanks for your help...much appreciated

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Would you consider - As what they say- to sound better if it was 'That's what they say?

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I saw you last night
With someone;
Too naive of me
To believe your lies.
How many times
You told me:
You are my love,
My life and my strength.


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I am gullible enough
To brush aside
What I saw. 2 comments


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