Daniel Bird Daniel Bird
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A deeply powerful line! It offers absolutely more than just a physical element but rather a deeply emotional sense of agony and suffering! Great job!

Daniel Bird Daniel Bird
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This is a sweet and precious line, offering a delightful air to what had been already read!

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Puzzle Heart


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soul mates

Broken slivers, pieces scattered


Fragmented fell, and then shattered


Heart once whole, in pieces lay


This can’t really be the way!


Tiny splinters, specks of dust


Lies, hate and broken trust


Dreams of future now turn to ash


What was once a blush now is a rash 1 comment


Eyes red from weeping salty tears


This has reconfirmed my fears


Alone, I cry, fighting off the dark


My damaged heart bears another mark


Then comes you, with eyes so keen


To put me back to the way I’d been


Each piece of heart, your hands did find


You kissed each piece, your love so kind 2 comments


My heart began to dance once more


No longer shattered on the floor


For our love did hold the cracked heart


This puzzle heart is your work of art


My hand in yours, my heart did beat


Livened my walk, put springs in my feet


No longer broken, my heart thrived


Now I am living, I have survived!


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