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The nameless Writing Dictator Bitch is telling me to leave a comment here.

Michael Starr Michael Starr
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It'd be cool to see the song for this.

Michael Starr Michael Starr
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Sorry. This was more a criticism of the Nameless Overbearing Writing Bitch Ghost Mother than you. I like your poem here, which seems pointless to me to say here as it would ruin the style you seem to have constructed for yourself.

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I said his name,
In my head,
Over and over,
Over and over. 1 comment


I told myself,
"We're falling in love",
Over and over,
Over and over. 1 comment


Then I raised my arms,
And shouted to the heavens above,
Over and over,
Over and over. 1 comment


I was the happiest of any girl,
My heart and head was in a whirl,
Over and over,
Over and over.


Not a thought,
Concerned me more,
Over and over,
Over and over.


I was happy,
What else was love for,
Over and over,
Over and over.


He was in my heart,
And I held him there,
Over and over,
Over and over.


As my tears fell away,
I wished it would rain,
Over and over,
Over and over.


To hide my shame,
And cover my pain,
Over and over,
Over and over.


I listened to his words,
Everyday,
Over and over,
Over and over.


I watched the days fade,
While everything changed,
Over and over,
Over and over.


Where was the happiness I had made,
Now I'm rearranged,
Over and over,
Over and over.


I still say his name,
In my head,
Over and over,
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