Davide Castel Davide Castel
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I have a small suggestion. There should be a space between the 2nd and 3rd paras. Keep them all uniformly in a 4 line verse.

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Short Song of Hope


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(Richards helper)- this is a song I heard him singing, it's not all of the song only the begining for I could not write it out, hope many of you will enjoy his words


Looking up at the sky
Eyes wide open
But still in the dark
I remain with hope in my heart,


Come hold my hand
Tell me things will get better
Even if it rains,
Won't put me down
Hope is in my heart
Just hold my hand,
Just hold my hand,
And Tell me things will get better 1 comment


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