Warren Gates Warren Gates
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Thanks,Lucy,for noticing, I made the correction.

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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How did you manage to delete my comments? I often try, but cannot seem to do it.

Warren Gates Warren Gates
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That was completely weird and I have no idea how it happened. I felt like I had committed a small misdemeanor.

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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It is weird! because others have told me that they also cannot do it. When I have made a correction, I like to delete those suggestions, but cannot do it. Good for you for discovering, even if by accident!!!! Hang in there!

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Everydays, neverdays
Time spent in waiting rooms
Stormy skies, sleepless nights
Self-inflicted gloom


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There’s a shadow around my heart
That wasn’t there before


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And the stars burn away
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And everything is grey
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