Paul Day Paul Day
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I think that the line ending in "endless" and the next line are too similar. I know it's a song, but this doesn't seem to fit all that well.

Paul Day Paul Day
Recommendations: 14

I think that the line ending in "endless" and the next line are too similar. I know it's a song, but this doesn't seem to fit all that well.

Paul Day Paul Day
Recommendations: 14

I think that the line ending in "endless" and the next line are too similar. I know it's a song, but this doesn't seem to fit all that well.

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Darkness Incarnate


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Darkness incarnate
It consumes the world
When will we see the end
To this discontent?


Darkness, my ally
I move through the shadows
Unseen and unknown, I am waiting
For the sun to break through the clouds


Where have you gone?
Why does this all feel so wrong now?
I can’t go on
The road is so long, it seems endless
And I am afraid of what might be at the end
Of this darkness, my friend 1 comment


Covered in shadow
I lie in wait
One with the gloom, they can’t see me
Am I even here?


Where have you gone?
Why does this all feel so wrong now?
I can’t go on
The road is so long, it seems endless
And I am afraid of what might be at the end
Of this darkness, my friend 1 comment


This world, so fragile
It is fading away
Before our eyes, it is receding
Darkness, the trade
But I can’t let the light drain away


Where have you gone?
Why does this all feel so wrong now?
I can’t go on
The road is so long, it seems endless
And I am afraid of what might be at the end
Of this darkness, my friend 1 comment


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