Kitchera Hicks Kitchera Hicks
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its supposed to be for because of the way he worded the first line "we traveled OUR path happy laughing" :D

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Okay, but it just didn't sound right to me. Just my personal opinion though.

Kitchera Hicks Kitchera Hicks
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think of it like this while reading it they are walking down the same path happy and care free then she sees another shed like to take on her own she cheated on him by straying down a different path and not staying on the one they shared there fore she chose her own path :D

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Oh! Yes, put that way, it would make more sense. Thanks for the clarification.

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For Charlie

Hand in hand
We traveled our path
  Happy
  Laughing


Our purpose
I thought clear
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But you strayed
For your own path
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A lone wanderer
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