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i felt i was on fire with all the things i could have told you.


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i loved her more when i was sober.
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love starts with that of a flickerin' cigarette
i swear i could feel your love before i knew your name.

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i've been doing my best to enjoy my memory,
the fleeting moments that forever stay at bay.
there's nothing i can do to return to that day
so i just sit and smile as i recall the way
her smile filled me up with explosive joy.
i'm older now than i was even just yesterday
and it saddens me to know that this is vanity,
the way i now smile and try so hard to be happy.
i love myself now more than i have before but maybe
that's just because i long to hold again my lovely.


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