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soul mates

As an assignment, I took quotes from "Life of Pi". Changing a few words, this is what I got.

I thought I was alone
A wordless darkness that you avoid

Alone or not, lost or not
I continued to wait

I feel myself weakening
I could accept this

An inability to let go
How can I not dwell 1 comment

I am losing
My eyes go dull

Like a candle in the night
It was over

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