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Nicole Martinez Nicole Martinez
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Losing


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As an assignment, I took quotes from "Life of Pi". Changing a few words, this is what I got.


I thought I was alone
A wordless darkness that you avoid


Alone or not, lost or not
I continued to wait


I feel myself weakening
I could accept this


An inability to let go
How can I not dwell 1 comment


I am losing
My eyes go dull


Like a candle in the night
It was over


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