Joel Pickett Joel Pickett
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I Like this, is it here or there?

Amanda Krumme Amanda Krumme
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I had not noticed before that I refer to the garden as both here and there. That wont work haha. I think I prefer there. Thanks for pointing that out!

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In my dreams there's a garden


The most beautiful I've ever seen


Where the roses are red and the violets are blue


Bright skies and grasses so green


This is my escape


A place to get away


I'm usually the only one there


But you're welcome to visit, or stay


It's peaceful and it's quiet


But somewhat lonely you see


It would be perfect if you were there 2 comments


To share the glory with me


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