Asma Ahsan Asma Ahsan
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Nice. Soul sisters. :) Line one, 'each other'. Space in between words please.

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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You also need to change each other in the next to the last line.

Daniela Bustamante Daniela Bustamante
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Thanks for pointing it out.

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We Are One


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soul mates

My writing partner wrote this for me when we were in High School. We were always talking about writing and sharing our stories with eachother, encouraging one another to keep going; Her name is Marisol :)


We've seen each other always
Together in life
In sync in mind
Talking as if we are one
Writing becoming our passion
A language no one else can speak
Words that express us
Stories that show our souls
A life worth living
Walking hand in hand
Helping; protecting one another
Doing everything together
Following the same path
Living our dreams
Friends for life
Never losing each other
Our spirits and souls are one 4 comments


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