Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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I do not know if it is spelled differently in Australia but it s /b lily not lilly ( that goes for all the lillies_- lilies here).

Paul Day Paul Day
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You know you are right. I don't know what I was thinking. I guess I started with Lilly and kept repeating the same mistake. Of course the first one is meant to be a name, but I will change the others. Thanks *embarrassing* lol

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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I thought it was but a momentary lapse, Paul. as always you are the most prolific writer on this site.

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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I especially like the last two lines of this stanza.

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