Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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As a suggestion you could merge these two lines together so instead of "I need time to think about the presents, What am I going to buy for my family this Christmas" you could just simplify it to "I need time to think about what I'm gonna buy my for family this Christmas"

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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I assume that God would also expect you to at least have some input into your plans for 2014 :)

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This poem is about christmas day and what the future holds for me in 2014.


I need time to think things over
I need time to find myself
I need time to think about my options
I need time to think about my life
I need time to think about christmas day
I need time to think about the presents.


What am I gonna buy for my family this Christmas? 1 comment


I don't have any idea as every christmas, gets harder and harder.


When christmas is over
It's time to plan for the new year
What will the future hold for me in 2014?
Only god knows the answer
So I leave the power in the hands of god
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