Jim Miller Jim Miller
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This stanza doesn't read smoothly for me.

Sheena Koops Sheena Koops
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This past summer my youngest daughter got left behind at a church after a tea for my parents. She had fallen asleep. For about forty five min once we realized we had all driven home and she wasnt wi t h any of us..... I was so scared. Then when we found her I sobbed so deeply. This line says to me the kind of cry I imagine or maybe can't imagine if a child is really lost. The jarring line. "Lost her child" works for me because there is nothing smooth about the experience. Does that make sense?

Allen Clarke Allen Clarke
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None but a parent could understand. Yes, in this age of insensibility,the heartbreak of personal loss and how we react to it, says so much about the human condition.

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Sliver of Moon


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Just a little something which came to me as I recalled an ancient lullabye.


sliver of moon
rides over stand
of shadowy poplar


Wind cries
like Woman
Lost Her Child 3 comments


ghosts of winter
speechless sentinels
in holy awe


they dread
the night watch
though they may


never say it
only whisper
secret wishes


to warm
the lonely heart
of last summer


go now
sliver of moon
hide on Earth`s other side


until you
become whole again
sliver of moon


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