Please login or signup to add a comment to this paragraph.


Add comment   Close
Brielle Saylor Brielle Saylor
Recommendations: 0

Yours Truly, Jade (1)


Share this writing


Link to this writing



Start Writing

More Books

Harley Bailey Harley Bailey
Recommendations: 29
Amnesis
Jennifer Killby Jennifer Killby
Recommendations: 6
The Legend of The Travelers: Willow's Journey
Georgina Connor Georgina Connor
Recommendations: 8
Lilith
Amanda Krumme Amanda Krumme
Recommendations: 18
Avery King Chapter One
Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
Recommendations: 23
Under the Double Star - Chapter One

Well, this is really the first thing I've written and I've decided to do it in chapters. This is just the first one so don't judge me for the lack of interesting things happening so far, but I'd love your feedback/opinion on my writing. ?


idk if any one sees this because there isn't a "save as draft button' or anything but my whole writing deleted, i'm gonna go cry now. bye


Link to this writing

Share this writing


Next: The Dog