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Beside the teenage girl "that" throws a ball....??? What do you think ??

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The Crashing Waves


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When I find myself getting wrtiers block I sometimes just start something as see where it ends up. This is a sort of poem/mantra staring with a simple sentence and adding a new sentence each paragraph. Not sure if it makes much sense but see what you think.


Waves crash upon the seashore


A dog runs into the waves
That crash upon the seashore


A dog runs after a ball
running into the waves
That crash upon the seashore


A teenage girl throws a ball and
Her dog chases after it
running into the waves
That crash upon the seashore


Children build sandcastles
Beside the teenage girl
That throws a ball and
Her Labrador puppy chases after it
running into the waves
That crash upon the seashore 1 comment


Parents/guardians bathe in the UV Rays
Whilst their children build sandcastles
Beside the teenage girl
That throws a ball and
Her Labrador puppy chases after it
running into the waves
That crash upon the seashore


Scavenging Seagulls soar above
Circling the Parents/guardians; bathing in the UV Rays
Whilst their children build sandcastles
Beside the teenage girl
That throws a ball and
Her Labrador puppy chases after it
running into the waves
That crash upon the seashore

Dark clouds gather ominously
Above the Scavenging Seagulls
Circling the Parents/guardians; bathing in the UV Rays
Whilst their children build sandcastles
Beside the teenage girl
That throws a ball and
Her Labrador puppy chases after it
running into the waves
That crash upon the seashore


Rain falls from the ominous gathering of clouds
Raining on the seagulls
Raining on the Guardians and parents
Of the children who abandon their soaked castles
Raining on the teenage girl
Raining on her soggy dog
Raining on the waves
That crash upon the seashore  


The rain finally abates
The clouds have disappeared
The seagulls have flown
The dog is back home
With the teenage girl
And the parents/guardians have left
With their saturated children
But the waves continue their endless cycle
And crash upon the seashore


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