Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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"Not beating the air with waning strength but living like an eel wrapped in your electricity" a great analogy.

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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Perhaps "guiding the path "for" my feet to run"

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Psalm of Trust


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Exploding from the gates,


   I emerge as a mighty steed


Ready for battle, ready to run


   Not beating the air with waning strength


But living like an eel wrapped in Your electricity


   Oh, Lord, I live for You 1 comment



May my foes not overwhelm me in my sleep


   May I stay awake and believe the truth


May You guide the path of my feet to run

   And may You energize my life to go forward 1 comment



To You only will I run and in You I will live


   Blessed be Your name


And may it ever shine


   Even in the darkness



For there is no darkness that can hide You


   And no place where Your light will not shine


      My heart is open to You, oh God.


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