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Birthday in April


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Oh birthdays and how we would like to slow the time inbetween them. I need some advice on this poem's punctuation.


Birthday in April


Swept drapes bellow
good morning today!
All April's singing
my welcome displays
Share suns cup; a shining brimful
you left departing yesterday
Let's celebrate with today cake
deftly carried my way unscathed
depart you must your just today?
I'll set the table, place the plates
Tomorrow cakes not your forte?
A pot I'll pour with cups to match
I humbly beg of you to stay
Keep candles lit upon my cake
Today your tomorrow's yesterday


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