Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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I think that writing "A piece of that puzzle that does not belong" seems to suggest the writer has a low self esteem and is crying out for people to offer their sympathy. Better would be something like "I'm a puzzle piece that cannot find a place to fit...(just my own opinion)/

Nikki Coble Nikki Coble
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Looking at it now, that line does kind of come off that way. In my mind, I had more of an idea to write the poem as though, well, using the poem's original metaphor, there was a stray puzzle piece in the mix that was not actually from the puzzle. Like it had been mixed in from another puzzle, but was a close match to the current puzzle.

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I am a puzzle piece.
A puzzle piece that does not belong.
I don't quite fit,
I'm not quite "it". 2 comments


I could go here..
I might fit there...
My color scheme is a close match...
But no, alas,
I do not fit,
There are some gaps.


I am a puzzle piece.
A puzzle piece that does not belong.
I don't quite fit,
I'm not quite "it".


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