Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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It would be better to only use the word "Full" once. something like "I'm so full of emotion, My brain feels like a balloon at the point of bursting and yet more and more air keeps inflating it"

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I'm so frustrated.
I'm so full of emotion.
My brain feels like a balloon,
Full to the point of bursting,
And there is more air yet being pumped in. 1 comment

I want to cry,
I want to scream.
I want to collapse and just give in,
I want to be strong.
I want to rationalize,
I want to punch the wall.

I just want to know what to do.
Why is this so hard?
Why is it so hard to make up my mind?
Why can't I rationalize this?

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