Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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"I hate you as vivid as a the flowers that grow in springtime." I like this as not many people use the beauty of flowers to describe how much they hate someone.

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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In the first paragraph you have "fell" should be "feel" probably just a typo.

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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The "I" in "i'll" should be capitalized.

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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The "I" in "i'll" should be capitalized. This is just for consistency. I realize it is probably another typo. unless you had a reason for this.

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