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what you've done to me.

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I'm so scared, and I don't know why.
My feet are on the ground, but my heart's in the sky.
The blood is rushing through every vein,
If I fake it, I'll end up insane.
Save me, please, I'm scared to death
You invade my thoughts, you take my breath
The floor is gone from beneath my feet
It disappeared with my dying heartbeat.
I feel so lost and mad.
you were the best my heart ever had.
now your gone and fading away.
I wish I spoke words I wanted to say.
im empty with this idea of love.
with no one in particular my head is above.
the sky is so gray and bleak.
my eyes look up to see a streak.
This thing was brief and beautiful.
It constructed hope that was quite delusional.
it reminded me of you.
it was here and gone without a clue.
Takes my breath in beauty and delight.
I watch as my heart fails without a fight.
There I go...down the rabbit hole.
goodbye world goodbye soul.
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