Asma Ahsan Asma Ahsan
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Effective contrast using the words gentle, turmoil, soothing. Paints the right picture.

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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Thanks again, you are so encouraging.

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Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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My first two haiku's


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