Asma Ahsan Asma Ahsan
Recommendations: 31

Begins as beautifully poignant but ends the verse on a positive note. Very effectively done.

Please login or signup to add a comment to this paragraph.


Add comment   Close
Cindy Beitinger Cindy Beitinger
Recommendations: 37

The Pheonix


Share this writing


Link to this writing



Start Writing

More from Cindy Beitinger

Kiss Me Again...
SKY
YOU
KARMA
ScribeSlice Abandoned

More Poetry

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
Recommendations: 45
Murder in the Senseless
Leoni Carlson Leoni Carlson
Recommendations: 12
Expressivity
Aaron Greene Aaron Greene
Recommendations: 30
Author's Clog
Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
Recommendations: 23
JUST BECAUSE
Kitchera Hicks Kitchera Hicks
Recommendations: 11
soul mates

From the ashes of despair
rise up and take the reins of my heart's desire
turn my wishes into a burning fire
that propels me towards my destination
let me have my victory and my salvation 1 comment


let me feel the warmth of true bliss
that fills my heart with happiness
let me awaken a new inspired confident me
and lift the branches of my willow tree


Sadness has lived too long in my bones
leaving too many unturned stones
Discovery and growth are where my path leads
but first I must dispense with the weeds


They have crowded and stunted the thoughts in my brain
put my focus and purpose in a different lane
I must remember all the strengths I have within me
Enter new unchartered waters of discovery


Let me find new roots and grow to new heights
let me bring out the beauty of my inner light
It has always been there hiding in the dark
to reawaken in me that elusive spark


The wheels are slowly beginning to turn
stoking the fire that will help me continue to learn
soon the light within me will bring a new outer glow
revealing the true self I used to know


Link to this writing

Share this writing


Next: SKY