Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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I blindly see, the riddle of the puzzle

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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if you notice the title , direct is an opposite of digression(i saw that in a dictionary that shows antonyms of words). i am doing opposites in this piece.

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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end; that is the reason I cease to be.

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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as i already explained in comment above.

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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still the silence of each whisper? - just suggestion.

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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i am saying the tolling is more powerful than the silence ...this is why it stills it.

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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there is no wrong or right, as i have said before everyone reads and understands as they see it.

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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To drown is to breathe? Or am I not interpreting this correctly?

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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i thought that breathe is the expulsion of air while breath is the intake, if i am wrong tell me.

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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Breathe is a verb which I thought would be more appropriate as it is something someone was doing. Breath is a noun so it a little ambiguous if the subject is an action or a name of a thing.

Leonard a. Wronke Leonard a. Wronke
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which word would better relay the meaning in this context.

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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whom? I think that is more grammatically correct, though I could be wrong.

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you may be correct but until another comes to read and says the same as you as with breath i will leave it until there is a consensus.

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DIRECT DIGRESSION


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