Don Yarber Don Yarber
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is there more? a comma after "jam" indicates there is another line or two. I hope there is more, cause this is a great piece!

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Oops! a typo. This was just a very short piece written at that time. As you may have gathered, I don't write long pieces. Thanks for thinking there should be more.

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My Peter Pan


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Here is another repost, on the series of my other half!


My Peter Pan   ...  at Surfers Paradise. Qld.


My Peter Pan,
eating croissants and jam

He looks forward to these,
each year we come here


The walks on the beach,
that’s what happiness is!
To unwind and to find,
a greater peace in his mind


To float like he’s free,
and to do what does please
To rest and relax,
now how hard is that?


He walks and he talks,
he eats and he sleeps
That’s Peter Pan,
and this is my man!


He complains, that’s still true,
so what else is new?
Our times on the beach,
is no time to preach.


We walk and we talk,
and the seagulls, they squawk
So we make it a fun thing,
and I say he’s my king!

The sea is therapeutic,
so vibrant, a real beauty
He is my cuddly bear,
who cares and who shares.


My man, Peter Pan,
eating croissants and jam.

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