Davide Castel Davide Castel
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the last line, would 'seek' sound better than 'find?'

Paul Day Paul Day
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Actually this was taken in part from scripture which says "beware your sins will find you out".

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Maybe separate these 8 lines into four like the others?

Paul Day Paul Day
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Hi, I put these together as one stanza because I change tone and rhythm here. It is designed to stand apart from the rest. It could work either way though.

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Thought it was an oversight, but I see, yet again.

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The Time Will Come


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The Time Will Come


The time will come,
when those who take,
will have everything
taken from them.


The time is near,
when all evil works,
the hatred and malice,
of all will be revealed.


The day is soon,
that evil cannot hide.
For your deception,
will find you out. 3 comments


The day draws near,
when everything you own,
even your very life,
Will come to nought.


When the bell of last days,
is upon the dressing of our life.
When goodness soon,
will replace all strife.
when darker days,
have met their end.
On justice and mercy,
will all depend. 3 comments


The future awaits,
the judgement of us all.
From the greatest of us,
to the very small.


In times to come,
the atrocities of men,
will be shown to all,
on that you can depend.


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