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Another alphabetic brainstorm.  Couldn't decide which one was better ... Any suggestions?


Which one is better?
(1)
A Blessed Creature
Did Exit From
God’s Heaven
Instilling Justice,
Karmic Love,
Musically Nurtured,
Often Priceless,
Quietly Restful,
Sensitive, Talented,
Unpretentious,
Virtuous Woman
Xmas, You’re Zodiac.


(2)
A Blessed Creature
Did Exit From God,
He Insisted!
Just, Kind, Loving
Mamma, Nonna,
Optimistic Purity
Quite Rare,
Simply The Ultimate
Virtuous Woman
(E)xcelling Yonder Zone.


This was, my mother.


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