Joel Pickett Joel Pickett
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I Like this, is it here or there?

Amanda Krumme Amanda Krumme
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I had not noticed before that I refer to the garden as both here and there. That wont work haha. I think I prefer there. Thanks for pointing that out!

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In my dreams there's a garden

The most beautiful I've ever seen

Where the roses are red and the violets are blue

Bright skies and grasses so green

This is my escape

A place to get away

I'm usually the only one there

But you're welcome to visit, or stay

It's peaceful and it's quiet

But somewhat lonely you see

It would be perfect if you were there 2 comments

To share the glory with me

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