Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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Some corrections you may wish to consider. Ghost of the World may sound better. For one day or four days (which ever you prefer) "after that they die my team and I saw everything though stage and through the jungle frind - friend in front of our car was a tiger sudden - suddenly away near the road abig house not - not sure what this means. in the end I thought about it for a few seconds and concluded that I foolish.

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Rohith Ayinkalath Rohith Ayinkalath
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ghost is dream

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long long in city  name  ghost  of  world
Some  people go to city  four day
After it there  die
Me and my  team  went  to see  we saw everthing stage  and  threw the  jungle sudden my   frind spot the car  an front of our car it was atwo tiger a man came and took the tiger away near the road abig house not but  it very scary
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And after it i  when i  open  last gift i sa.w a
ghost  toy
Ithink for a lsecord and foolish i am  
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