Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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Perhaps consider amending the line "I will pray to God, Goddess, whoever is listening" to "I will pray to God, a Goddess or to whoever is willing to listen/hear me"

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You asked me what I wanted for Christmas
You didn’t believe me when I said just you
Well now it’s over and I wish I could ask you for a present
Because I would still ask for you
I would ask for you back in my arms
I would ask for your lips to be on mine
For your mind to be preoccupied by me
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It isn’t right of me to ask you now
So instead, I will write to Santa
I will pray to God, Goddess, whoever is listening
That I just want you
Not books or money or clothes
I want you, back in my arms
Back in my life and back in my heart
If that isn’t possible
Then what I ask for instead is two little things
Your safety
And your happiness 1 comment

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