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Forty one years, we’ve notched on our belt
Time went so fast, that’s how we felt

Forty one years,  all gone in a flash
So did some friends, and also some cash

Forty one years, we’ve lived in this dream
Some were nightmares, others serene

Forty one years, of happiness and pain
If there’s no challenge, where is the gain?

Forty one years, we’ve lived to the full
Did what we could, and 'Till death us do part,' rule

Forty one years, it’s now come down to this
Some years were not perfect, but we do still kiss

Forty one years, each one an added bonus
For we know not, what could lay beyond us

Forty one years, I've lived with this man
And to this day, he's still my Peter Pan

Forty plus one, each year an added fun
For we are still living and God is forgiving.

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