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Davide Castel Davide Castel
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My Inner Self

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This is an exercise of trying to explain my inner  self.                                                                   It's just a spur of the moment bit of writing.

I am a person with hidden depths
What you see is what you get

If you look closer, you'll see another side
One that pleases and the one I try to hide

The love and light that shine from my eyes
Is my true spirit, so freely on the rise

An open book I tell it as I see it, therefore,
The mirror image, will reveal that bit more

A child of beauty, my colours are vibrant
A child who loves nature and also assignments

I'm practical that's true, just ask around
But the child inside of me, is homeward bound

I'm careful not to display too much of what's inside
For to do so, would show weaknesses, I try to hide. 2 comments

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